Can
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I can change people\'s hair style. Because it was my job for a long time. My family always says that you can do well. Maybe I\'ll open a hair salon.
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Hello [이름], I really appreciate your time doing your homework. Keep up doing a good job, don\'t quit okay?
~Teacher Aki :)
I can change people\'s hairstyle. >> CORRECT!
OR>> I can do different hairstyles.
Because it was my job for a long time.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Because I used to do it before.
My family always says that you can do well.
>> My family always tell me that I can do well.
Maybe I\'ll open a hair salon.
>> Maybe, I\'ll open a salon in the future.
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