Can a hobby be dangerous?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Of course. There are so many dangerous hobbies. All dynamic hobbies can be dangerous. When I was on the soccer team. I played as aggressive as a profassional player. Sometime I got hurts. One of my friend\'s leg was broken, He couldn\'t go to work for a while. Nobody could earn money by playing soccer, but everybody addicted to playing soccer.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]ny!
Oh. That\'s true. Even though they are dangerous, they are fun to play.
~ Trixia
Content:
Yes. Of course.
- CORRECT.
There are so many dangerous hobbies.
- CORRECT.
All dynamic hobbies can be dangerous.
- CORRECT.
When I was on the soccer team. I played as aggressive as a profassional player.
- When I was on the soccer team, I played aggressively as a professional player.
Sometime I got hurts.
- Sometimes I got hurt.
One of my friend\'s leg was broken, He couldn\'t go to work for a while.
- One of my friends\' legs was broken, so he couldn\'t go to work for a while.
Nobody could earn money by playing soccer, but everybody addicted to playing soccer.
- Nobody could earn money by playing soccer, but everybody was addicted to playing soccer.
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