Can a nation’s economic policy influence its international reputation?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course. One nation’s domestic economic policies can influence its reputation abroad because current countries relate to each other more than ever. Any country without interaction to other countries can’t survive. For example, reclusive regime like North Korea have difficulty in providing necessities because North Korea can’t produce all products needed to survive.
On top of that, stable and growth-oriented policies can boost investor trust from inside and outside, leading to contributing to higher credit ratings. And when we challenge financial crisis, if we handle this crisis effectively, our competence can acknowledged by countries across the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve. Your ideas are insightful and well-organized. You clearly understand the connection between economic policies and international reputation. Just watch for small grammar points like subject-verb agreement and prepositions. Also, refining sentence flow a bit can make your writing even stronger. Nevertheless, you did such a wonderful job and keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
Of course. One nation’s domestic economic policies can influence its reputation abroad because current countries relate to each other more than ever.
>> CORRECT
Any country without interaction to other countries can’t survive.
>> Any country without interaction with other countries can’t survive.
For example, reclusive regime like North Korea have difficulty in providing necessities because North Korea can’t produce all products needed to survive.
>> For example, a reclusive regime like North Korea has difficulty providing necessities because it can’t produce all the products needed to survive.
On top of that, stable and growth-oriented policies can boost investor trust from inside and outside, leading to contributing to higher credit ratings.
>> On top of that, stable and growth-oriented policies can boost investor trust both domestically and internationally, contributing to higher credit ratings.
And when we challenge financial crisis, if we handle this crisis effectively, our competence can acknowledged by countries across the world.
>> And when we face a financial crisis, if we handle it effectively, our competence can be acknowledged by countries across the world.
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