Can a robot be human?
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Teacher Travis.
I have seen the Artificial Intelligence movies such as Ai and Terminator.
>>I\'ve seen an Artificial Intelligence movies such as Ai and Terminator.
When I was a high school student I saw the Ai which is directed by Steven Spielberg as part of the class.
>>When I was a high school student, I watched Ai which is directed by Steven Spielberg as part of our class.
I was a bit shocked that robots have on their ideas and have some emotions to human.
>>Correct.
even they are having human’s life style and thinking of that as if they are real human.
>>Even they have human life style and thinking that as if they are real human.
At that time I didn’t know that existing robots and automated generation is coming like the 4th industrial revolution.
>>Correct.
But now we are facing on whether robots infringe upon human’s area or not.
>>Correct.
Even though they have conspicious intelligence rather than humans,
>>Correct.
They must not to occupy human’s area to keep our own.
>>Correct.
They can’t be humans and they should remain as a tool to develop modern technology and improve life’s quality.
>>Correct.
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