Can a robot be human?

2017-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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I have seen the Artificial Intelligence movies such as Ai and Terminator. When I was a high school student I saw the Ai which is directed by Steven Spielberg as part of the class. I was a bit shocked that robots have on their ideas and have some emotions to human. even they are having human’s life style and thinking of that as if they are real human. At that time I didn’t know that existing robots and automated generation is coming like the 4th industrial revolution. But now we are facing on whether robots infringe upon human’s area or not. Even though they have conspicious intelligence rather than humans, They must not to occupy human’s area to keep our own. They can’t be humans and they should remain as a tool to develop modern technology and improve life’s quality.

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Teacher Travis.

 

I have seen the Artificial Intelligence movies such as Ai and Terminator. 
>>I\'ve seen an Artificial Intelligence movies such as Ai and Terminator.
 When I was a high school student I saw the Ai which is directed by Steven Spielberg as part of the class.
>>When I was a high school student, I watched Ai which is directed by Steven Spielberg as part of our class.
 I was a bit shocked that robots have on their ideas and have some emotions to human.
>>Correct.
 even they are having human’s life style and thinking of that as if they are real human.
>>Even they have human life style and thinking that as if they are real human.
At that time I didn’t know that existing robots and automated generation is coming like the 4th industrial revolution.
>>Correct.
But now we are facing on whether robots infringe upon human’s area or not.
>>Correct.
 Even though they have conspicious intelligence rather than humans, 

>>Correct.
 They must not to occupy human’s area to keep our own.
>>Correct.
They can’t be humans and they should remain as a tool to develop modern technology and improve life’s quality.

>>Correct.

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