Can allowing too much freedom sometimes lead to problems? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
If you are not responsible for your freedom, problems arise. You may commit illegal acts, and many accidents may occur due to actions you should not perform.
강사 첨삭
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If you are not responsible for your freedom, problems arise. You may commit illegal acts, and many accidents may occur due to actions you should not perform.
>> If you don\'t take responsibility for your freedom, problems can arise. You might commit illegal acts, and accidents may happen because of actions you shouldn\'t take.
>> If you fail to take responsibility for your freedom, problems are likely to occur. You may engage in illegal activities, and various accidents could result from actions that should have been avoided.
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