Can anyone be an artist?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think anyone can be an artist. I think that even if you draw a line or write a word, if you give meaning and thought to it, it can be an art. Anyone can become an artist if they want to do art. The desire to do it and the desire to enjoy it are more important than the talent. No matter how talented you are, you will not be able to continue art without those hearts.
강사 첨삭
I think anyone can be an artist.
>> CORRECT
I think that even if you draw a line or write a word, if you give meaning and thought to it, it can be an art.
>> Even drawing a line or writing a word can be art if you give it meaning and thought.
Anyone can become an artist if they want to do art.
>> Anyone can become an artist if they want to create art.
The desire to do it and the desire to enjoy it are more important than the talent.
>> The desire to create and the desire to enjoy art are more important than talent.
No matter how talented you are, you will not be able to continue art without those hearts.
>> No matter how talented you are, you cannot continue making art without that passion.
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