Can banning sweets, sodas, and fast food at schools promote better eating and health among school ki

Hello, [이름]! 

You wrote two essays tonight! :)
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It is true that allowing sweets, sodas and fast food in schools actually promote a very bad eating habit among kids. 

That\'s why they should be completely banned from schools.
I personally believe that when you are healthy, you can study better. :)
Thank you for writing tonight!
I am looking forward to your next essays. ^^
See you again on Monday. :)
~Teacher Charry

I think banning sweets, sodas, and fast food at schools premote better eating among school kids.

>> I think banning sweets, sodas, and fast food at schools promote better eating (habits) among school kids.
We allow sweets, sodas, and gast foods at school, amost all of the school kids want to eat them.

>> We allow sweets, sodas, and fast food at school, and most of the school kids want to eat them.

And that foods can make students fat, and that kinds of food can make students to have bad eating. 

>> Those food can make students fat. In addition, those kinds of food can make students have a bad eating habit. 
Also, kids and school is important to make healthier eating habits and that time, kids get the foods they like or they hate.

>> [Do you mean]: In addition, the school should promote a healthier eating habit among its students. The kids shouldn\'t eat unhealthy food.

When we allow to eat sweets, sodas, and fast food is schools, kids can like sweets,..etc and hate healty foods!

>> When we allow sweets, sodas, and fast food is schools, kids may prefer them over healthy food.