Can corruption be a good thing in some societies?
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There is a saying that there is no absolute evil or absolute good.
>> Correct!
Does it apply to corruption?
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I don’t think so.
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Even committing a terror, stealing, or murdering can have a reason.
>> Correct!
The forms and causes of corruption vary across countries.
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>> OR: The forms and causes of corruption vary in different countries.
While there are varying norms and traditions in terms of giving and accepting gifts around the world, clearly the abuse of power for personal gain is unacceptable in all cultures and societies.
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>> OR: While there are varying norms and traditions in terms of giving and accepting gifts around the world, it is clear that the abuse of power for personal gain is unacceptable in all cultures and societies.
Corruption cannot be justified for any reason.
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Corruption is never a good thing for a society.
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>> OR: It is never a good thing for a society.
People lose the moral values and ethics by experiencing some temporary benefits of corruption.
>> People lose their moral values and ethics by experiencing some temporary benefits of corruption.
Corruption impacts societies in a multitude of ways.
>> Corruption impacts societies in multitude ways.
In the worst cases, it costs lives.
>> In worst cases, it costs lives.
Short of this, it costs people their freedom, health, or money.
>> Did you mean: In short, it costs the people
We should have zero tolerance when it comes corruption.
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>> OR: We should not tolerate corruption.
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