Can K-pop filming locations or company buildings become tourist attractions?
학생이 쓴 원문
Many people visit Hollywood in USA.
Therefore I think K-pop is also possible.
Sometimes, I pass through the K-pop company buildings.
I saw many people who are fans of K-pop near the buildings.
They might be wait their artists.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
Many people visit Hollywood in USA.
>> Many people visit Hollywood in the USA.
Therefore I think K-pop is also possible.
>> Therefore, I think K-pop can achieve the same popularity.
Sometimes, I pass through the K-pop company buildings.
>> Sometimes, I pass by K-pop company buildings.
I saw many people who are fans of K-pop near the buildings.
>> I see many K-pop fans near the buildings.
They might be wait their artists.
>> They might be waiting for their artists.
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