Can knowledge be a burden rather than a benefit

2015-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think sometimes knowledge can be a burden rather than a benefit. For example, when I take out an insurance, it was very hard to decide. Since I have experienced about set a marketing plans for the insurance company, so I was knowledgeable about the insurance. That knowledge became so much burden to me, because I have to compare all the options and all the insurance company's insurance product by my self. Since I was know about the insurance, I couldn't believe the Insurance planner. That made me very tired. If I didn't know about that thoroughly, I would not have to worry about it. Even I was done in by that foxy salesman, I didn't realize it and in other way it might more happier than worried it.

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Hi, [이름]! (^^,) A great Wednesday to you! To be honest, this question also made me think of the possible disadvantages knowledge could give. Knowledge makes our lives easy and comfortable. It enables us to understand lifes problems and how to deal with them. However, it can also cause some problems. A lot of our present problems and challenges are directly caused by our high intelligence. Because of man\'s intelligence, he was able to invent nuclear weapons that could destroy not only his enemies but possibly the entire planet. He was able to create the so-called internal combustion engine which consumes oil and causes atmospheric pollution and global warming because of the by-products that it can produce. Man\'s intelligence also paved the way for the creation of \"designer viruses\" such as Anthrax which is supposedly for military use. However, these viruses could escape from laboratories and could affect civilian populations with devastating results. These are just a few of the disadvantages that too much knowledge and greed could bring. Knowledge in itself is not bad but when greed comes in, it can lead to very bad results. Thank you for this compositiong [이름]. It gave me something to think about. I hope you are having a wonderful day. Take care and God bless. ~Teacher Charry (^^,) I think sometimes knowledge can be a burden rather than a benefit. >> CORRECT! OR >> In my opinion, knowledge can be a burden rather than a benefit at times. For example, when I take out an insurance, it was very hard to decide. >> For example, when I availed of an insurance, it was very hard to decide. Since I have experienced about set a marketing plans for the insurance company, so I was knowledgeable about the insurance. >> It was difficult to decide because I am knowledgeable and I have an experience when it comes to marketing plans in insurance companies. That knowledge became so much burden to me, because I have to compare all the options and all the insurance company\'s insurance product by my self. >> The knowledge that I have became a great burden to me because I have to compare all of the options that I have and all of the insurance companies\' insurance policies by my self. Since I was know about the insurance, I couldn\'t believe the Insurance planner. >> Since I was knowledgeable about insurance policies, I didn\'t want to believe the insurance agent. That made me very tired. >> CORRECT! OR >> That made me feel so exhausted. If I didn\'t know about that thoroughly, I would not have to worry about it. >> If I didn\'t have an in-depth knowledge about it, then I don\'t have anything to worry about. Even I was done in by that foxy salesman, I didn\'t realize it and in other way it might more happier than worried it. >> Eventually, the foxy salesman was able to persuade me but I didn\'t realize it. However, getting persuaded is a lot better rather than having to worry about it.

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