Can knowledge be a burden rather than a benefit?
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Great essay again, Sir [이름]!
You are right! Knowledge could be a burden at times.
I appreciate your time in writing all of your ideas.
It is really nice that you always allot time for composition/
See you.
Teacher Nina
I don’t think knowledge could be a burden rather than a benefit.
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In short, knowledge can make our life more complex and complicated.
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We sometimes need simplicity rather than contemplating over trivial things.
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In ancient times, they could have enjoyed simple lives like going hunting when they hungry, sleeping and resting when there were nothing to do.
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They might not have to worry about studying and going to good college, although they could have other pains.
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Knowledge of negative events/facts can definitely be a burden especially when they are situations you do not have the power to change.
>> Knowledge of negative events/facts can definitely be a burden especially when there are situations you do not have the power to change.
Our pain grows and gets deeper because we know a lot about the consequence of our decisions and events.
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Our modern life is full of anxiety that couldn’t have existed in primitive times.
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The other cases are that our dreams or beliefs are fading away once we get to know about the reality.
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Good examples are childhood beliefs such as Santa Claus, imaginary friends, etc.
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It destroys childhood excitement
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