Can learning a foreign language change the way you think or see the world? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that learning a foriegn language change think about the world. Leaning language includes not only vocabulary and grammar but also culture. For example, sentences on English textbook are might be different with real conversation. They\'re almost formal and polit expression, but in daliy we use more comfortable words. Learning these daliy words, we should meet foriegn or watch drama. After we understand their culture, we can express the situation like them.
강사 첨삭
Hi! You explained your ideas very well, and I like how you mentioned that learning a language also means learning the culture behind it. That’s absolutely true, and it shows strong awareness of how language and worldview are connected. Your examples about textbook English versus real daily English were clear and meaningful. To improve your writing even more, try to focus on spelling (“foreign,” “daily,” “polite”), using smoother expressions, and making your sentences flow more naturally. Overall, your thinking is sharp, and you’re doing a great job expressing deeper ideas. Keep going, you’re improving every time!
-Teacher Wela
I think that learning a foriegn language change think about the world.
>> I think that learning a foreign language changes the way we think about the world.
Leaning language includes not only vocabulary and grammar but also culture.
>> Learning a language includes not only vocabulary and grammar but also culture.
For example, sentences on English textbook are might be different with real conversation.
>> For example, sentences in an English textbook might be different from real conversations.
They\'re almost formal and polit expression, but in daliy we use more comfortable words.
>> They are usually formal and polite expressions, but in daily life we use more casual words.
Learning these daliy words, we should meet foriegn or watch drama.
>> To learn these daily expressions, we should meet foreign people or watch dramas.
After we understand their culture, we can express the situation like them.
>> After we understand their culture, we can express situations the way they do.
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