Can manners affect your success in life? How?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Because if I give manners to other people, they will trust and respect me. For example, If I greet politely or use honorific and so on. And it will make success to me from do them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Daisy!
Great job. Being polite to everyone will lead you to become successful in life.
~Teacher Erin
Yes. Because if I give manners to other people, they will trust and respect me.
>>CORRECT
For example, If I greet politely or use honorific and so on.
>>For example, I will greet people politely or use honorifics and so on.
And it will make success to me from do them.
>>It will make me successful in doing them.
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