Can manners affect your success in life? How?
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I think It is affected but not that much.
>> correct!
or:
>> I think it is affected, but not that much.
Manner is escensial virture in life.
>> Manners is an essential virtue in life.
A person have Personal characteristics that is own pursuits, aims, values, thought, etc.
>> A person has his own characteristics like his own pursuits, aims, values, thought, etc.
because manner is promise to prevent a missundersnd, I always try to kind to people working with me every where and they are pleasure.
>> Manners is something that can prevent misunderstanding that is why I always try to be kind to people I\'m working with.
I can keep my job for a long time.
>> correct!
It’s successalful life.
>> It\'s a successful life.
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