Can music influence your behavior?

2022-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, it is. One of example, when I draw sad mood pictures I listen to calm music and when I draw exciting mood pictures I listen to cheerful music. Then the pictures draw more better

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Yes, it is. 

>> Yes, it can.

One of example, when I draw sad mood pictures I listen to calm music and when I draw exciting mood pictures I listen to cheerful music. 

>> One example is when I draw pictures with a sad mood, I listen to calm music, and when I draw pictures with an exciting mood, I listen to cheerful music. 

Then the pictures draw more better

>> Then I draw much more better pictures.

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