Can one make a good living without university educ
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Good morning my dear [이름]! Very nice article today. I agree with you that you should not measure success from the University where you graduated but by what you contribute to the society. Please take note of the corrections that I made. Have a good day!
If you graduated from a good university , it could me more easier to succeed than others in Korea.
>> In Korea, there's a belief that it is easier to succeed if you are a graduate from a good University.
But it is not always true.
>> But this is not always true.
we can see many successes who didn't graduate from a good univ or didn't enter a univ.
>> We can see a lot of successful people who didn't graduate in a good University or didn't enter a University.
Our former president didn't go to univ. but he was eleted as a president.
>> Our former president didn't go to a University but he was elected as a president.
Succedding isn't deeply concerned in university education.
>> Being successful doesn't rely mainly in getting a university education.
It is relevant to what and how you do in society.
>>Correct!
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