Can people change their personality if they want to? Do you know anybody who has changed theirs?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes,I can. Because I think it is right to change my personality if my personality is bad, uncomfortable, or inconvenient to others. Yes, I know someone who changed theirs. The person who changed is my family, my friend.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes,I can.
>>> Yes, I can.
Because I think it is right to change my personality if my personality is bad, uncomfortable, or inconvenient to others.
>>> CORRECT!
Yes, I know someone who changed theirs.
>>> CORRECT!
The person who changed is my family, my friend.
>>> The person who changed is my family, and my friend.
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