Can people change their personality if they want to? Do you know anybody who has changed theirs?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people can change their personality if they want. Cause this question’s best example is ME! When I was high school, I am extremely shy student. Even I went to art high school and majored in theater I felt really hard to contact eyes with other people and take the stage. But after I felt the importance of socializing with people, I tried to be outgoing. Of course there’s many painful moments, but I have a clear goal so it has become increasingly possible to switch to social and extroverted directions as needed.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I believe, it\'s a special skill to be able to adjust your personality to certain people and adapt to new situations. You\'re doing amazing! Thank you for sharing.
-T. Sonny
I think people can change their personality if they want.
>>Correct!
Cause this question’s best example is ME!
>>I agree because the best example for this question is me!
When I was high school, I am extremely shy student.
>>When I was in high school, I was an extremely shy student.
Even I went to art high school and majored in theater I felt really hard to contact eyes with other people and take the stage.
>>Even though I went to an art high school and majored in theater, I found it very hard to make eye contact with other people and take the stage.
But after I felt the importance of socializing with people, I tried to be outgoing.
>>Correct!
Of course there’s many painful moments, but I have a clear goal so it has become increasingly possible to switch to social and extroverted directions as needed.
>>Of course there are many painful moments, but I have a clear goal so it has become increasingly possible to switch to social and extroverted sides as needed.
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