Can people with vastly different cultural backgrounds live together peacefully? How
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Wow, You gave me a very difficult homework.
>>Correct!
We have our own culture, history, etc.
>> We have our own culture and history.
So, we have to accept other\'s culture, society, ancient custom, etc.
>> We have to accept other people\'s culture, society and ancient customs.
other\'s opinions are valuable, If you think your thoughts are important.
>> If you think your thoughts are important so as other people\'s opinion.
>> OR: Don\'t ever think that your opinion is more valuable that other people.
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