Can robots take over jobs meant for human?

2017-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Yes. Robots can take over jobs meant for human. A few days ago , I saw a Ted video that is about why there are still so many jobs?. Many years ago, automatic factories were made. since that time people said robots take over our jobs.And so many people lose their job after a few years later. But there are still many jobs. Because there are new jobs that human can do. For a example , when ATM was invented , we think many bankers lose a job. But there is a another job that call people to introduce bank products or loan products and that fix the robots. The more robots take over the job that is simple or needs a perfection, The more people should become a multiplayer. Um... it could be bad to human. but robot can make human convenience. So I think if there is a rule about robots like only 30 percent of job could be taken over by robots, then it will be okay.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kim!^^

Thank you for sending your homework. I always appreciate your hard work and effort in improving your skills. Keep up the good work!^^

~Kelly^^

Yes. Robots can take over jobs meant for human.

>> Yes. Robots can take over jobs meant for humans.

A few days ago , I saw a Ted video that is about why there are still so many jobs?.

>> A few days ago, I saw a Ted video that is about, \"why there are still so many jobs?\"
Many years ago, automatic factories were made.

>> Correct.

since that time people said robots take over our jobs.

>> Since that time, people said robots took over our jobs.

And so many people lose their job after a few years later.

>> And so many people lost their jobs after a few years.

But there are still many jobs.

>> Correct.

Because there are new jobs that human can do.

>> Because there are new job offers that humans can do.

For a example , when ATM was invented , we think many bankers lose a job.

>> For example, when ATM was invented, we thought that many bankers would lose their jobs.

But there is a another job that call people to introduce bank products or loan products and that fix the robots. 

>> But there are other jobs that call people to introduce bank services and their loan offers, which robots can\'t do. 
Um... it could be bad to human.

>> Um... it could be bad to humans.

but robot can make human convenience. 

>> But robots can make a human\'s life convenient.
So I think if there is a rule about robots like only 30 percent of job could be taken over by robots, then it will be okay.

>> So, I think if there is a rule that only 30 percent of jobs could be taken over by robots, then it will be okay.

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