Can robots take over jobs meant for human?
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Yes. Robots can take over jobs meant for human.
>> Yes. Robots can take over jobs meant for humans.
A few days ago , I saw a Ted video that is about why there are still so many jobs?.
>> A few days ago, I saw a Ted video that is about, \"why there are still so many jobs?\"
Many years ago, automatic factories were made.
>> Correct.
since that time people said robots take over our jobs.
>> Since that time, people said robots took over our jobs.
And so many people lose their job after a few years later.
>> And so many people lost their jobs after a few years.
But there are still many jobs.
>> Correct.
Because there are new jobs that human can do.
>> Because there are new job offers that humans can do.
For a example , when ATM was invented , we think many bankers lose a job.
>> For example, when ATM was invented, we thought that many bankers would lose their jobs.
But there is a another job that call people to introduce bank products or loan products and that fix the robots.
>> But there are other jobs that call people to introduce bank services and their loan offers, which robots can\'t do.
Um... it could be bad to human.
>> Um... it could be bad to humans.
but robot can make human convenience.
>> But robots can make a human\'s life convenient.
So I think if there is a rule about robots like only 30 percent of job could be taken over by robots, then it will be okay.
>> So, I think if there is a rule that only 30 percent of jobs could be taken over by robots, then it will be okay.
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