Can sadness be useful in people’s lives?
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently, I watched the movie \"Inside out\".
The movie said joy and sadness move together for life.
That\'s right. sadness also need for our life.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Thank you for sharing your opinion about sadness and incorporating it in the recent movie you have seen.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
Recently, I watched the movie \"Inside out\".
>>CORRECT
or >> Recently, I saw the movie \'Inside Out.\'
The movie said joy and sadness move together for life.
>> The movie showed that joy and sadness move together throughout life.
That\'s right. sadness also need for our life.
>>That\'s right. Sadness is also needed in our lives.
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