Can someone be fit and healthy without ever going to the gym?
학생이 쓴 원문
Sure.
If you have strong willpower, you don\'t have to go to the gym.
It\'s not important where you workout. Important thing is doing workout.
I think it\'s easier to go to the gym than do workout at home.
강사 첨삭
Advance Happy Valentine\'s Day, [이름] [이름]! You gave a clear and confident opinion, and your main idea is strong: willpower and consistency are more important than location. I also like that you added a personal comparison between going to the gym and working out at home, which makes your answer more realistic. To improve further, focus on small grammar details like verb forms (“work out” vs. “workout”) and complete sentence structure. Overall, this is a practical and well-organized response. Nice job!
-Teacher Wela
It\'s not important where you workout. Important thing is doing workout.
>> It is not important where you work out. The important thing is exercising regularly.
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