Can taking a sabbatical leave affect your chances of promotion? Explain.
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My research theme is about Cross-Culture Kids who live abroad.
So, If I spend my sabbatical in Canada, I have a schedule that research Korean adolescents who live in Toronto.
And my research experience abroad will have a positive effect in promotion.
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Can taking a sabbatical leave affect your chances of promotion? Explain.
My research theme is about Cross-Culture Kids who live abroad.
>>> My research focuses on cross-cultural children living abroad.
So, If I spend my sabbatical in Canada, I have a schedule that research Korean adolescents who live in Toronto.
>>> If I spend my sabbatical in Canada, I plan to study Korean adolescents residing in Toronto.
And my research experience abroad will have a positive effect in promotion.
>> I believe that this international research experience will positively contribute to my promotion.
>> OR: Conducting research abroad will enhance my prospects for career advancement.
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