Can the government do anything to improve people\'s health?
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I personally think they can\'t do it. For example, they recommend you that asparagus helps your health to clean blood. Do you want to try it? most people\'re aleady known for foods which help health taste bad. But a lot of fast foods taste good!!
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I personally think they can\'t do it.
>> CORRECT.
For example, they recommend you that asparagus helps your health to clean blood.
>> CORRECT.
Do you want to try it? most people\'re aleady known for foods which help health taste bad. But a lot of fast foods taste good!!
>> Do you want to try it? Most people already know that food that helps improve our health taste bad. However, there are still food that taste good.
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