Can traveling be educational? How?
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In my opinion, traveling is excellent education because we can see nature or urban city when we just go out. we can learn tons of things. If we travel other site, we can have chance to meet new people and hear some interesting stories from them. In addition, we can talk with foreigner in their language during traveling abroad. It be also to learn. That\'s why traveling is best education at least me.
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Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Yes, having new experiences through traveling can help you learn new things.
- T. Beth
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In my opinion, traveling is excellent education because we can see nature or urban city when we just go out. >>>> In my opinion, traveling is AN excellent education because we can see nature or urban city when we just go out.
we can learn tons of things.
>>>> CORRECT ( We can learn tons of things. )
If we travel other site, we can have chance to meet new people and hear some interesting stories from them.
>>>> If we travel other sites, we can have the chance to meet new people and hear some interesting stories from them.
In addition, we can talk with foreigner in their language during traveling abroad.
>>>> In addition, we can talk with foreigners in their language while traveling abroad.
It be also to learn.
>>>> It could also be a way to learn.
That\'s why traveling is best education at least me.
>>>> That\'s why traveling is the best form of education, at least for me.
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