Can we enjoy a hobby without having to spend anything?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that it needs a little money to enjoy a hobby.
For example, I like singing a song and join the band.
I just like that but I need a good microphone for singing because of performance.
If my hobby is running or walking, I don\'t need to spend .
But, in the case of this, I will probably spend to buy some sportwear. ^^;
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Come to think of it, you\'re right. To fully enjoy a hobby or to spice it up a bit, you would need to spend on some things you would need while doing it/them.
- T. Beth
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I think that it needs a little money to enjoy a hobby.>>> correct
For example, I like singing a song and join the band.
For example, I like singing a song and join the band.
>>> For example, I like singing a song and so I joined the band.
I just like that but I need a good microphone for singing because of performance.
>>> OR: I just like that but I need a good microphone for singing to have a good performance.
>>> OR: I just like that but I need a good microphone for singing to have a good performance.
If my hobby is running or walking, I don\'t need to spend .
>>> correct
But, in the case of this, I will probably spend to buy some sportwear. ^^;
But, in the case of this, I will probably spend to buy some sportwear. ^^;
>>> OR: However, in this case, I would probably spend on buying some sportswear.
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