Can you be happy even if you are poor

Hi, [이름]! I appreciate your time writing this composition. Happiness is a choice, right? ^^

Take note of these few corrections. I\'ll talk to you later. ^_^

~T.Avery

Many people said that money don\'t make you happy.

>> Many people say that money can\'t make you happy.

I thinks that is true.

>> I think that is true.

But I\'m also think that if you were poor, you could not be happy.

>> However, I also think that if you were poor, you could not be happy.

Nowadays, we can\'t do anything without money even drinking water.

>> CORRECT

So i want to say that if you want to be happy the wealthy is more better than poverty.

>> Therefore, I want to say that if you want to be happy, being wealthy is better than living in poverty.