Can You Believe It? page. 8 No.6

2010-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 tim

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6.Answers the Questions a.She is taking a ferry to bictoria. b.She sits down is deck. c.There are her mewspaper and candy bar in a chair. d.He picks up the candy bar and eats it. e.Then he takes the paper and walks off. f.She is very angry because, she thinks that the man ate he candy bar and took her newspaper without saying a word. so she does the same way. g.She can see her newspaper and candy bar in her car. h.She would be very embarrassed. so her face changed red. i.I often take a bus. j.I was really red in the face when my lie was caught. k.I sit down moft of the day. I.I'm a housewife so I usually stay at home with my daughter Yedam. Hi~ Abby.. I wrote the answers of my thought about my English textbook. I wonder whether they are right or wrong Grammatically. Bye~

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Hi [이름]! I'm impressed cause you are very diligent at making your  homeworks. Keep it up! However I noticed that there were some flaws with the spelling of words. Anyway, just do constant practice and I believe that in no time,  you'll do a lot better!   T. Abby ^_^    Here are my corrections for you: 6.Answers the Questions >> Answers to the questions on page 8, Activity number 6:  a.She is taking a ferry to bictoria.>> CORRECT answer though you made a mistake on the spelling. The right spelling is VICTORIA and NOT BICTORIA b.She sits down is deck" >> She sits down on a chair at the deck. c.There are her mewspaper and candy bar in a chair >> Her newspaper and candy bar are in a chair. (NEWSPAPER not MEWSPAPER) d.He picks up the candy bar and eats it. >> CORRECT e.Then he takes the paper and walks off. >> CORRECT f.She is very angry because, she thinks that the man ate he candy bar and took her newspaper without saying a word.so she does the same way >> She is very angry because she thinks that the man ate her candy and took her newspaper without saying a word and so she does the same way to avenge. g.She can see her newspaper and candy bar in her car. >> Her newspaper and candy bar are on the seat of her car. h.She would be very embarrassed.so her face changed red.  >> Because she is embarrassed of what she did. i.I often take a bus>> CORRECT j.I was really red in the face when my lie was caught >> I was really red in the face when I was caught telling a lie. k.I sit down moft of the day >> CORRECT (but you misseplled the word MOST) l.I'm a housewife so I usually stay at home with my daughter Yedam.>> I am a housewife so I usually stay home with my daughter Yedam. I wrote the answers of my thought about my English textook. >> I wrote my answers and my opinions regarding the questions from the textbook. I wonder whether they are right or wrong Gramatically. >> I wonder whether they are gramatically wrong or right.  

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