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Briefly state your growing up period. I have like play with mini cars and remote control car or something from when I was a child and I have played basketball in many teams as captain so I have readership and cooperative spirit. What are your strengths &weaknesses? What have you done to make up for the weak points? I always do everything diligently until I complete this perfectly with doing my best. And I was a little introspective. But I changed to be outgoing through volunteer service in the Philippines. What are your hobbies and specialties? (max.200) I have had championships in some basketball competitions. Especially I have got a victory in the semifinals in Street basketball competition by NIKE. And I enjoy read magazines related to technology of car.

Here is the continuation of my corrections, Anthony! Briefly state your growing up period.I have like play with mini cars and remote control car or something from when I was a child and I have played basketball in many teams as captain so I have readership and cooperative spirit. >>> I used to play mini cars and remote control cars or some things like those when I was a child. >>>I also played as a captain in many basketball teams. >>>I believe these are some reasons why I have a leadership and cooperative spirit.What are your strengths &weaknesses? What have you done to make up for the weak points?I always do everything diligently until I complete this perfectly with doing my best. >>> Correct  And I was a little introspective. >>>Correct  But I changed to be outgoing through volunteer service in the Philippines.>>> CorrectWhat are your hobbies and specialties? (max.200)I have had championships in some basketball competitions. >>>Ok >>> Our team had won championship games in basketball before. - Better Especially I have got a victory in the semifinals in Street basketball competition by NIKE. >>> Especially I have taken the victory in the semifinals in the Street basketball competition by NIKE. And I enjoy read magazines related to technology of car. >>> And I enjoy reading magazines related to car technology.