Can you describe a recent experience that taught you something valuable or changed your perspective
학생이 쓴 원문
I am very simple. So, If I like it, I am happy. If l don\'t like it, I am sad.
But I recently am learning to control my feeling.
Because I realized when I expressed all my feeing, someone might feel so bad.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, Lea!
You are one step closer to success!
-Hanna ^^
I am very simple.
>>Correct.
So, If I like it, I am happy.
>>Correct.
If l don\'t like it, I am sad.
>>Correct.
But I recently am learning to control my feeling.
>>But I recently started learning to control my feelings.
Because I realized when I expressed all my feeing, someone might feel so bad.
>>Because I realized that when I express all my feelings, someone might feel bad.
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