Can you describe a recent experience that taught you something valuable or changed your perspective
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a recent experience of changing my perspective on someone.
It\'s about first impressions, which is very common and happens a lot.
I am learning how to swim.
I met two people in the swimming pool, and their first impressions were scary.
So, I had a sense of distance, but I happened to talk about swimming.
Contrary to my expections, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong. They even encouraged me.
That\'s when I realized. First impressions were just first impressions. I shouldn\'t have judged people by their first impressions.
My view of the two has changed and they are now my best swimming seniors and teachers.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! That\'s a great lesson. It indeed applies to the saying, \'Don\'t judge a book by its cover.\' I\'m also glad you\'re having fun learning swimming with your seniors. That\'s lovely. Thanks for this, [이름]. See you in our next class!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Can you describe a recent experience that taught you something valuable or changed your perspective?
I have a recent experience of changing my perspective on someone.
>> Correct
It\'s about first impressions, which is very common and happens a lot.
It\'s about first impressions, which is very common and happens a lot.
>> It\'s about first impressions, which are very common and happen a lot.
I am learning how to swim.
I am learning how to swim.
>> Correct
I met two people in the swimming pool, and their first impressions were scary.
I met two people in the swimming pool, and their first impressions were scary.
>> Correct
So, I had a sense of distance, but I happened to talk about swimming.
So, I had a sense of distance, but I happened to talk about swimming.
>> So, I felt distant, but I happened to talk with them about swimming.
Contrary to my expections, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong.
Contrary to my expections, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong.
>> Contrary to my expectations, both of them kindly taught me about swimming and warmly told me what was wrong.
They even encouraged me.
>> Correct
That\'s when I realized.
That\'s when I realized.
>> That\'s when I realized that first impressions were just first impressions.
First impressions were just first impressions.
>> Correct
I shouldn\'t have judged people by their first impressions.
>> Correct
My view of the two has changed and they are now my best swimming seniors and teachers.
My view of the two has changed and they are now my best swimming seniors and teachers.
>> Correct
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