Can you describe a time when feedback helped you improve?
학생이 쓴 원문
My boss requested me to make a report for investigation of competitor\'s wiper.
I investigated the competitor\'s wiper and submit my report to him.
I think he felt the report is insufficient.
He gave me a lot feedback such as correction of typo, deep investigation for competitor, how to make the report using PPT program, and so on.
After feedback, My reporting skill have been improved.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. I investigated the competitor\'s wiper and submit my report to him.
3. I think he felt the report is insufficient.
4. He gave me a lot feedback such as correction of typo, deep investigation for competitor, how to make the report using PPT program, and so on.
5. After feedback, My reporting skill have been improved.
Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you have a great weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. My boss requested me to make a report for investigation of competitor\'s wiper.
>>My boss requested me to create a report on the investigation of a competitor\'s wiper.
2. I investigated the competitor\'s wiper and submit my report to him.
>>I investigated the competitor\'s wiper and submitted my report to him.
3. I think he felt the report is insufficient.
>>I think he felt that the report was insufficient.
4. He gave me a lot feedback such as correction of typo, deep investigation for competitor, how to make the report using PPT program, and so on.
>>He gave me a lot of feedback, such as correcting typos, conducting a deeper investigation of the competitor, learning how to create the report using PowerPoint, and so on.
5. After feedback, My reporting skill have been improved.
>>After the feedback, my reporting skills have improved.
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