Can you describe a time when feedback helped you improve?
학생이 쓴 원문
You have sent a feedback for my writing homework.
It helped improving my writing skill.
I\'m not a native so it is hard to feel nuance and to know real expressions.
강사 첨삭
Hello! I\'m so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
You have sent a feedback for my writing homework. It helped improving my writing skill.
You sent feedback for my writing homework, and it helped improve my writing skills.
I\'m not a native so it is hard to feel nuance and to know real expressions.
I’m not a native speaker, so it’s hard for me to feel the nuances and know natural expressions.
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