Can you describe an autumn day?
학생이 쓴 원문
Leaves turn to red,orange,yellow color.
Dragonflies are playing in the field.
Rices are ripe and lower their head.
People like to go out and have picnic.
강사 첨삭
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Dragonflies are playing in the field.
Rices are ripe and lower their head.
People like to go out and have picnic.
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Leaves turn to red,orange,yellow color.
>> Leaves turn to red,orange, and yellow.
Dragonflies are playing in the field.
>> Correct
Rices are ripe and lower their head.
>> Correct
People like to go out and have picnic.
>> Correct
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