Can you describe the best Halloween costume you've seen?(ANSWER)

I saw Dracula, Elsa, Super Man, Zombie, and Wonder Woman costume. I think the best costume is Zombie costume. Because she wore a ripped T-shirt and ripped pants. Also, she made injuries on her face and body(!) And, she acted as a Zombie :) Her skin was a little gray, so I was more scared. She rushed at me with a long hair! I almost fainted then. Anyway, my best Haloween costume is Zombie costume :) Thank you for reading! By. [이름]

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Can you describe the best Halloween costume you have seen? Please answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I saw Dracula, Elsa, Super Man, Zombie, and Wonder Woman costume.
I think the best costume is Zombie costume.
Because she wore a ripped T-shirt and ripped pants.
Also, she made injuries on her face and body(!)
And, she acted as a Zombie :)
Her skin was a little gray, so I was more scared.
She rushed at me with a long hair!
I almost fainted then.
Anyway, my best Haloween costume is Zombie costume :)

 

CORRECTIONS:

I saw Dracula, Elsa, Super Man, Zombie, and Wonder Woman’s costume.
I think the best costume was the Zombie’s.
Because, she wore a ripped T-shirt and ripped pants.
Also, she made injuries on her face and body!
And, she acted as a Zombie :)
Her skin was a little gray, so I was more scared.
She rushed at me with a long hair!
I almost fainted then.
Anyway, my best Halloween costume is Zombie costume :)

 

 

** Dear [이름], another well done for you! ^^ You just have few corrections in your homework. Please take note of them.

 

Speak with you on Monday. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------