Can you describe your current job?
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My current job is a university student.
Korean university student have to study hardly.
Competition doesn\'t finish after they graduate high school.
In a university, credit is relative evaluation.
Almost students study hard, so library doesn\'t have empty sit on near week of exam,
Moreover, they have to do another activities which are needed to get a job.
So university students are busy and have very much thought about their future.
However, many of them can play well.
They often drink with many people and hang out with club people.
They can communicate various people.
I could get many chance to meet and understand many people too.
Otherwise, they can challenge many experiences.
They are adult, but university and their parents almost can support them, so they get challenge easier than other people.
I think all university students have to get various experiences within they can do.
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My current job is a university student.
>>I am actually a university student.
Korean university student have to study hardly.
Korean university student have to study hardly.
>>Korean university students have to study hard.
Competition doesn\'t finish after they graduate high school.
Competition doesn\'t finish after they graduate high school.
>>Correct.
In a university, credit is relative evaluation.
In a university, credit is relative evaluation.
>>In the university, credits are important in the evaluation.
Almost students study hard, so library doesn\'t have empty sit on near week of exam,
Almost students study hard, so library doesn\'t have empty sit on near week of exam,
>>Almost all students study hard, so the library doesn\'t have any empty seats before the exam day.
Moreover, they have to do another activities which are needed to get a job.
Moreover, they have to do another activities which are needed to get a job.
>>Moreover, they have to do other activities which are needed to get a job.
So university students are busy and have very much thought about their future.
So university students are busy and have very much thought about their future.
>>So most university students are busy and have a lot of thoughts about their future.
However, many of them can play well.
However, many of them can play well.
>>On the other hand, there are many of them who play well.
They often drink with many people and hang out with club people.
They often drink with many people and hang out with club people.
>>They often drink more and hang out with party people.
They can communicate various people.
They can communicate various people.
>>They are able to interact with various people.
I could get many chance to meet and understand many people too.
I could get many chance to meet and understand many people too.
>>I could get many chances to meet and understand many people too.
Otherwise, they can challenge many experiences.
Otherwise, they can challenge many experiences.
>>They can be considered as challenging experiences.
They are adult, but university and their parents almost can support them, so they get challenge easier than other people.
They are adult, but university and their parents almost can support them, so they get challenge easier than other people.
>>They are adults who get support from their parents, so their challenges are easier than other people.
I think all university students have to get various experiences within they can do.
I think all university students have to get various experiences within they can do.
>>I think all students have to experience different things in life.
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