Can you describe your current job?

2019-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Now, I am working with my father. but I am on a training step. So my current works are helping him and assistging him such as faxing, emailing etc. My company is intermediary trade about lether prouducts. last week, I went to one of our client\'s factories to learn how to be release our products. It is almost a field trip. I am having fun during working time becuase I am learning many things.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s good to know that you\'re enjoying your job.:)

Now, I am working with my father.

>>> CORRECT

but I am on a training step. 

>>> But I am on a training process. 

So my current works are helping him and assistging him such as faxing, emailing etc.

>>> So, my current works are helping him and assisting him such as faxing, emailing etc. 

My company is intermediary trade about lether prouducts.

>> My company is intermediary trade about leather products.

last week, I went to one of our client\'s factories to learn how to be release our products. 

>>> Last week, I went to one of our clients\' factories to learn how to be release our product. 

It is almost a field trip. 

>>> CORRECT

I am having fun during working time becuase I am learning many things.

>>> I am having fun during working time because I am learning many things.

 


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