Can you describe your personality?

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~~ Teacher Sharon ^^

I think sensitive and positive are the best word to describe me.

>> I think \"sensitive\" and \"positive\" are the best words to describe me.
While working as a nurse, I am good at catching patients feeling and their needs before they ask.

>> With my work as a nurse, I have developed a skill of anticipating my patients\' needs even before they ask.
So I can give positive and practical advice and treatment to the patients who are frustrated, with their illnees.

>> I can give positive and practical advice and treatment to the patients who are frustrated with their illnesses.
For example almost patients who are expected to receive treatment for cancer are really nervous and in great anxiety.

>> For example, most patients who are expected to receive treatment for cancer are really nervous and have great anxiety.

So when I was checked their vital sign and condition before the treatment . I always said that “You look so nice today in my experience you will receive treatment really successful and also I will stand by you and also keep my eye on you so don’t be afraid.”

>> So when I check their vital signs and condition before the treatment, I always say, “You look so nice today. In my experience, treatments for cancer are often successful. Also, I will stand by you and always keep an eye on you so don’t be afraid.”
Then they are smiling and relived during treatment.

>> Then, they often smile and feel relieved during treatment.

I sure positiveness will bring the best result.

>> I\'m sure positivity will bring about the best results.