Can you describe yourself in 3 words?
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First, I describe myself as \"rabbit\" because my mom and other town people said to me that I\'m very cute and pretty as a \'rabbit\'. When she praises me, she always call me the \'rabbit\' even when I take pictures with my friends and look at them. Second, I also describe myself as a princess becasue my mom says that I am pretty as a princess. When y mom looks at me and my other best friends, then she says that I;m the most beautiful kid in my class girls. Last, I describe myself as a teacher because I am smart because I am smart. I\'m good at English and math. Especially, I am good at multiplication because I learned it from my dad. Also, when I am a grown up, I want to be a math teacher.
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Hello there Ellie~
Thank you for doing your homework again.
I really like your answers however we can still improve on your grammar.
I hope this is helpful to you~
See you in class !
First, I describe myself as \"rabbit\" because my mom and other town people said to me that I\'m very cute and pretty as a \'rabbit\'.
>>First, I describe myself as a \"rabbit\" because my mom and other people in town said that I\'m very cute and pretty like a \"rabbit\".
When she praises me, she always call me the \'rabbit\' even when I take pictures with my friends and look at them.
>>When she praises me, she calls me \"rabbit\" even when I take pictures with my friends and look at them after.
Second, I also describe myself as a princess becasue my mom says that I am pretty as a princess.
>>Second, I describe myself as \"pretty\" because my mom says that I am pretty like a princess.
When y mom looks at me and my other best friends, then she says that I;m the most beautiful kid in my class girls.
>>When my mom looks at me and my other friends, she says that I\'m the most beautiful kid in my class.
Last, I describe myself as a teacher because I am smart because I am smart.
>>Lastly, I describe myself as a teacher because I am smart.
I\'m good at English and math.
>>CORRECT
Especially, I am good at multiplication because I learned it from my dad.
>>I am especially good at multiplication because I learned it from my dad.
Also, when I am a grown up, I want to be a math teacher.
>>When I grow up, I want to be a Math teacher.
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