Can you give an example of some opportunities you have missed? What did you do to make it up?
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I have missed a lot opportunities for whole life.
For example, my friend suggested me Bitcoin for 4~5 years ago.
At that time, Bitcoin is not famous like now. so, the price is very lower than now.
I very disappointed my decision that I\'m not invested to Bitcoin.
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I have missed a lot opportunities for whole life.
>> I have missed a lot of opportunities in my whole life.
For example, my friend suggested me Bitcoin for 4~5 years ago.
>> For example, a friend of mine suggested that we should invest in Bitcoin around 4 or 5 years ago.
At that time, Bitcoin is not famous like now. so, the price is very lower than now.
>> At that time, Bitcoin was not famous unlike now so, the price is much lower.
I very disappointed my decision that I\'m not invested to Bitcoin.
>> I was very disappointed in my decision to not investing.
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