Can you judge someone by the clothes that they wear? If so, how?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Many people are judgment to see the clothes.
In front of many people.. of coures I did.
Maybe If I am teenager.It\'s ok.but I\'m adult.
I think I give strangers first impression,what? I sad \"It decides your wearing the clothes.\"
because If you wear dirty the clothes.It gets to feel bad impression to them.
So we should be trying to wear clean clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hi JO!
I heard from another Korean student that clothes are actually big deal to each men and women.
Sometimes, it is even a ground of rejection and criticism to most women.
I think clothes make a person, but not all the time. I read some books featuring rich people and it changed my perspective to this matter as well. Haha!
Here are the corrections.
Yes. Many people are judgment to see the clothes.
>> Yes. Many people are judgmental to clothes.
In front of many people.. of coures I did.
>> In front of many people, of course I did.
Maybe If I am teenager.It\'s ok.but I\'m adult.
>> Maybe, if I am a teenager, it\'s okay. But, I\'m an adult.
I think I give strangers first impression,what? I sad \"It decides your wearing the clothes.\"
>> I think I give strangers my first impression. I said, \"I decide the kind of clothes I wear.\"
because If you wear dirty the clothes.It gets to feel bad impression to them.
>> Because if you wear dirty clothes, it gives bad impression to them.
So we should be trying to wear clean clothes.
>> So, we should be trying to wear clean clothes.
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