Can you live in another country for the rest of your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Just off the top of my head, I can’t live in another country where I don’t have any family or relatives although it is one of the most beautiful areas with a nice seashore and nature. In addition, I may need to learn a new language of the country, which takes me many years to master the language. Therefore, emigration to another country is not for a mid-aged man like me who has lived for over 40 years. It could be a new and hopeful start for a young person willing to suffer from adapting to the new environments for the rest of his life longer than his adjustment period.
In this respect, happiness in our life depends on who to live with rather than where to live. This fact is true of travel as well. No matter how uninteresting the destination is, if the companions are fun to be with, your trip is sure to be exciting and satisfactory.
Anyway, if I answer the question above, I\'d say I can\'t do it.
강사 첨삭
Interesting perspective, Steve! :) You were able to assess an important factor in moving or traveling to a different country, which is companionship. Although the idea of exploring a brand new world can be exhilarating for some people, it can also induce the feeling of being homesick after a while.
~T.Harmony <3
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In addition, I may need to learn a new language of the country, which takes me many years to master the language.
>> ...,which would take me several years to master.
Therefore, emigration to another country is not for a mid-aged man like me who has lived for over 40 years.
>> \"mid-aged\" -> \"middle-aged\"
It could be a new and hopeful start for a young person willing to suffer from adapting to the new environments for the rest of his life longer than his adjustment period.
>> CORRECT!
In this respect, happiness in our life depends on who to live with rather than where to live.
>> CORRECT!
This fact is true of travel as well.
>> This fact is true for traveling as well.
No matter how uninteresting the destination is, if the companions are fun to be with, your trip is sure to be exciting and satisfactory.
>> CORRECT!
Anyway, if I answer the question above, I\'d say I can\'t do it.
Anyway, if I answer the question above, I\'d say I can\'t do it.
>> CORRECT!
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