Can you recall any memorable car drive in your life?

2014-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When talking about car drive, a few terrible accidents I got into when I was a beginning driver came to my mind rather than having a pleasant memory. Right after I first obtained a driver license, I was so excited to drive but I did not have a car. So, I got my brother’s car key at one early night when he was sleeping because he wouldn’t allow me to drive by myself. At that time, I lived together with my old brother. I drove out to the nearby playground of the middle school to practice. Unfortunately I hit the soccer pole that was in the playground when circulating there, causing the front bumper cracked. My brother was very upset and reprimanded me. Another accident occurred when I drove an important visitor from the US to dealers. When I drove down the ramp to enter the parking lot in the basement of the building, I hit the entrance barrier to fell down on the windshield due to my unskilled operation. I have also damaged my boss’s car severely when I drove his car.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir [이름]!

I\'m sorry to hear about the incidents that happened when you started to learn how to drive.

I think you learned a lot from it and you became good at driving.

I really want to learn how to drive but I\'m scared.

Maybe I won\'t be good at driving. Hihihi!

Thanks for sharing this story.

Talk to you very soon.

Teacher Nina


When talking about car drive, a few terrible accidents I got into when I was a beginning driver came to my mind rather than having a pleasant memory. 

>> Did you mean: When talking about car drive, a few terrible accidents I got into when I was a beginner driver came to my mind rather than having a pleasant memory. 

>> OR: When talking about car drive, a few terrible accidents happened to me when I was beginning how to drive came to my mind rather than having a pleasant memory.

Right after I first obtained a driver license, I was so excited to drive but I did not have a car.

>> Correct

>> OR: Right after I first obtained a driver\'s license, I was so excited to drive but I did not have a car.

So, I got my brother’s car key at one early night when he was sleeping because he wouldn’t allow me to drive by myself.

>> Correct

At that time, I lived together with my old brother.

>> At that time, I lived together with my older brother.

I drove out to the nearby playground of the middle school to practice.

>> Correct

Unfortunately I hit the soccer pole that was in the playground when circulating there, causing the front bumper cracked. 

>> Correct

My brother was very upset and reprimanded me.

>> Correct

Another accident occurred when I drove an important visitor from the US to dealers.

>> Correct

When I drove down the ramp to enter the parking lot in the basement of the building, I hit the entrance barrier to fell down on the windshield due to my unskilled operation.

>> Correct

I have also damaged my boss’s car severely when I drove his car.

>> Correct

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