>>> Can you recall (without looking) who and what are on your country\'s banknotes and coins? Why ar
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In paper money Ten thousand Won there is Sejong the great king. He made the Hangeul. Also he interested in science and astronomy.
Different people and various thing in paper money show us our traditional culture.
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Can you recall (without looking) who and what are on your country\'s banknotes and coins? Why are they famous or important?
In paper money Ten thousand Won there is Sejong the great king.
>> The Ten Thousand Won banknote is adorned on the obverse with the great king Sejong.
He made the Hangeul.
>> He made Hangul.
>> OR: He is famous for introducing Hangul, the Korean alphabet.
Also he interested in science and astronomy.
>> Also, he was interested in science and astronomy.
Different people and various thing in paper money show us our traditional culture.
>> Different people and various things in the South Korean currency show us our traditional culture.
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