Can you remember any specific nightmare?
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When I was young peobably under 10, I ran away from a monster. The monster was too big for me and I tried to run as much as I can avoid not to be catched. I was sweat and finally I fell down in the cliff. After awakening, I was crying.
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Hi [이름],
Thanks for sharing your stories about your nightmare. It truly sounds scary.
-Rachel
When I was young probably under 10, I ran away from a monster.
>> correct
The monster was too big for me and I tried to run as much as I can avoid not to be catched.
>> The monster was too big for me and I tried to run as much as I could to avoid being caught.
I was sweat and finally I fell down in the cliff. After awakening, I was crying.
>> I was sweating and finally I fell down the cliff. When I woke up, I was crying.
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