Can you remember the name of the first movie you saw that made you cry? What was it about?

2020-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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The name of the first movie that made me cry is \'Doggy Poo\'. It is a short film in which the doggy poo finds a place where it can be useful. It was so touching when it found it helpful to be absorbed into the flowers.

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~ T. Tricia

The name of the first movie that made me cry is \'Doggy Poo\'.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> The first movie that made me cry is \"Doggy Poo\".

It is a short film in which the doggy poo finds a place where it can be useful.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> It\'s a short film about a dog\'s poo finding a place where it can become useful.

It was so touching when it found it helpful to be absorbed into the flowers
>> It was so touching when it finally found a place as a fertilizer to a plant and became a beautiful flower.

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