Can you share a bad restaurant experience?
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When I was high school student, I visited a restaurant.
Some restaurant have a special discounted price at specipic time. for example, 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order discounted menu.
Anyway, I ordered that menu, but restaurant didn\'t recieve my order. because time was over. and the owner said so rudely.
So, I left the restaurant.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing a bad restaurant experience that you had. It\'s really sad to be treated rudely.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
When I was high school student, I visited a restaurant.
>>When I was a high school student, I visited a restaurant.
Some restaurant have a special discounted price at specipic time. for example, 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order discounted menu.
>>Some restaurants have special discounted prices at specific times. For example, from 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order from a discounted menu.
Anyway, I ordered that menu, but restaurant didn\'t recieve my order. because time was over. and the owner said so rudely.
>> Anyway, I ordered from that menu, but the restaurant didn\'t receive my order because the time was over. The owner spoke to me so rudely.
So, I left the restaurant.
>>CORRECT
OR >>Therefore, I decided to leave the restaurant.
>>When I was a high school student, I visited a restaurant.
Some restaurant have a special discounted price at specipic time. for example, 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order discounted menu.
>>Some restaurants have special discounted prices at specific times. For example, from 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order from a discounted menu.
Anyway, I ordered that menu, but restaurant didn\'t recieve my order. because time was over. and the owner said so rudely.
>> Anyway, I ordered from that menu, but the restaurant didn\'t receive my order because the time was over. The owner spoke to me so rudely.
So, I left the restaurant.
>>CORRECT
OR >>Therefore, I decided to leave the restaurant.
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