Can you speak with stranger?

2019-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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Hello, Today I will explain to you, that I had a great conversation with a complete stranger. Actually, I can have a great conversation with a complete stranger except for an unofficial conversation. Um...I\'m very shy to have a conversation with stranger, But If I become friendly with them, I become very talkative. I am scared of male strangers. Because I saw the news about a male stranger that kills or hits the kids. I think it is a very horrible thing. So, I am scared of male strangers. Second, I like to make a new friend. Many people who live near my house say, I am very good at making a new friend. Because I like to make friend. How about become friend with me?

강사 첨삭

Hello, Today I will explain to you, that I had a great conversation with a complete stranger.

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 Actually, I can have a great conversation with a complete stranger except for an unofficial conversation.

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 Um...I\'m very shy to have a conversation with stranger, But If I become friendly with them, I become very talkative.

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 I am scared of male strangers. Because I saw the news about a male stranger that kills or hits the kids.

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 I think it is a very horrible thing.

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 So, I am scared of male strangers.

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 Second, I like to make a new friend.

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 Many people who live near my house say, I am very good at making a new friend.

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 Because I like to make friend.

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 How about become friend with me?

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