Can you swim?

2020-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name]. I can swim very well. 10 years ago, I learned swimming. Beginning time, I had a little difficulties. I can\'t breathe when I swim in the water. I can not stay on the water. Whenever I swim on the water, my body go down under the water. But I can swim now. Wherever I am. River, the pool, as like every place for swimming. I have a only normal swimming pants and water glassess. I can go 1000meter by swimming without stop.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]~ Great job on doing your homework. Keep it up!

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name].

I can swim very well.

>> CORRECT

10 years ago, I learned swimming.

>> CORRECT

Beginning time, I had a little difficulties.

>> In the beginning, I had a little difficulty learning.

I can\'t breathe when I swim in the water.

>> CORRECT

I can not stay on the water.

>> I cannot stay in the water.

Whenever I swim on the water, my body go down under the water.

>> Whenever I try to swim, my body sinks in the water.

But I can swim now.

>> CORRECT

Wherever I am. River, the pool, as like every place for swimming.

>> I can swim anywhere; the river, pool, or any other place where it is allowed to swim.

I have a only normal swimming pants and water glassess.

>> I only have normal swim wears and water goggles.

I can go 1000meter by swimming without stop.

>> I can swim about 1000 meters without stopping.

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