Can you talk abour four places you would like to go on a vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I want to go to abroad. For example Hawaii. Germany. Netherland. Sweden.
Hawaii has a beautiful nature and relax.
Germany has a peace and high level science.
Netherland has my son\'s girl friend.
I like Sweden without special reason
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Hawaii has a beautiful nature and relax.
Germany has a peace and high level science.
Netherland has my son\'s girl friend.
I like Sweden without special reason
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I want to go to abroad.
>> I want to go abroad.
For example Hawaii. Germany. Netherland. Sweden.
>> For example; Hawaii, Germany, Netherlands, and Sweden.
Hawaii has a beautiful nature and relax.
>> Hawaii has a relaxing beautiful nature.
Germany has a peace and high level science.
>> Germany has a peaceful high level of science.
Netherland has my son\'s girl friend.
>> Netherlands is where my son\'s girlfriend at.
I like Sweden without special reason
>> I like Sweden for no specific reason.
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